Comic 101 - Draginbeard Chp 3, pg 13

2nd Dec 2013, 12:01 AM in No place like home.
Draginbeard Chp 3, pg 13
Average Rating: 5 (8 votes)
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Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 12:01 AM edit delete
Draginbeard
Happy birthday Matt!

Had some small issues with clarity on this page, I wanted to show Tinker investigating the drooling shadow, but I had to ask for a second opinion to make sure.

And if you're browsing around any of the comic sites he is on, give the dwarf a friendly vote =)

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Comments:

Lopriest 2nd Dec 2013, 2:20 AM edit delete reply
Lopriest
I like the layout on this page, well done.
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 9:22 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Thanks, I like to play around with panels to see what I can make work.

Im still having trouble getting on DD but Ive been able to follow along with yours via TWC. I just cant leave a comment. =(
cattservant 2nd Dec 2013, 2:36 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
"Poot!"!
Magically Ambivalent!
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 9:23 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Pooter power!
Notos 2nd Dec 2013, 7:22 AM edit delete reply
Notos
I had no trouble following what Tinker was doing. I enjoyed Jolly's line on this page, I often forget where he's from originally, his story gives him a lot of potential for lots of different adventures, I hope you continue with it after this current story.
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 9:24 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Centcomm gave me a good suggestion and I added Tinker into the 5th panel to show better that he was scanning the area.

The internet, server worlds, all come into play throughout the story.

Its supposed to make sense when I tie it all in, lets see if I can actually do this without rolling too many eyes =P
Dodom 2nd Dec 2013, 8:03 AM edit delete reply
Dodom
I am 75% sure Tinker is inedible, even for a dragon!
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 9:27 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Leerpain would still try to eat him, though for a dragon, it would be like eating a furry crumb.
TheSmilingPsycho 2nd Dec 2013, 8:41 AM edit delete reply
TheSmilingPsycho
It's kinda like a dust bunny with a tail.
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 9:28 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Tinker has to watch out or some Ogre is gonna grab and swing him around by his tail!
LeRenardRoux 2nd Dec 2013, 1:43 PM edit delete reply
LeRenardRoux
Uh-oh. Drips of slime are never a good sign...

I always love Jolly's internet lingo. :)
Draginbeard 2nd Dec 2013, 4:40 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Yeah, Mags blood is still dripping out of Cizors mouth, dragons aren't much for table manners =P

I love being able to use pop culture, there will be more pop babble from Jolly throughout the story. Everyone around him will be going "huh?" but 10 years of surfing the internet changes you.

LooeyQ 3rd Dec 2013, 7:51 AM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
I'd hang around anyone that knows how to rip a good fart every now and then! Its good for the soul!
Draginbeard 3rd Dec 2013, 1:57 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
LOL Just as long as it isn't a slow leak. I still want to be able to breathe =P
Guest 4th Dec 2013, 6:57 AM edit delete reply
nice one again.
Nice mix of colors and shadows.
shinka 4th Dec 2013, 6:58 AM edit delete reply
shinka
Oops it's me..wasn't logged in lol

nice one again.
Nice mix of colors and shadows.
Draginbeard 4th Dec 2013, 3:23 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Its all good, thanks =)
Joel Sawyer 6th Dec 2013, 11:14 PM edit delete reply
Joel Sawyer
Jolly has totally gone meta, making jokes and references that the rest of the room know nothing about! Typical gamer! Always nice artwork, dude!
Draginbeard 7th Dec 2013, 2:19 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Thanks Joel =)

I just love throwing game stuff in the mix.
Centcomm 15th Dec 2013, 2:10 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
I really like the overhead view .. excellent POV actually ALL the POVs are fantastic :D
Draginbeard 15th Dec 2013, 2:50 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Thanks for the help getting this the clarity cleaned up on this page, btw =)
Centcomm 15th Dec 2013, 3:17 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
I did ? * confused look * your welcome! hehe :D
Draginbeard 15th Dec 2013, 4:37 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Yup, you suggested I place Tinker in the corner of panel 5 to show that he was scanning the landscape looking for the shadow.
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