Comic 55 - Draginbeard Chp 2, pg 11

7th Jan 2013, 12:01 AM in Cruel World
Draginbeard Chp 2, pg 11
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Draginbeard 7th Jan 2013, 12:01 AM edit delete
Draginbeard
Ok, l debated about including this page, and going straight into the fight scene instead. (The following page begins the fighting) l do like how it turned out, but l think its one page too many.

I'm thinking now that l will cut it out of the sequence when l do the print book.

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cattservant 7th Jan 2013, 12:21 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
Gotta be fair and negotiate at least a little!
Draginbeard 7th Jan 2013, 9:34 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Tried to bluff, but he is worse than the spirit is when it comes to negotiations!
Centcomm 7th Jan 2013, 12:29 AM edit delete reply
Centcomm
actually I like the page .. keep it :D
Draginbeard 7th Jan 2013, 9:36 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
I do like how it came out, and once the sequence is laid out I will take another look at it.

I'm trying not to drag things out.
LooeyQ 7th Jan 2013, 6:22 AM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
Glad you put the page in, lol!
Jollys tried pulling a fast one eh!
Draginbeard 7th Jan 2013, 9:37 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
I figure I would leave it in, and then once the chapter is done, revisit and see if it needs to stay in.

Never put Jolly in a diplomatic situation...it never goes well!
Dodom 7th Jan 2013, 12:40 PM edit delete reply
Dodom
He should have named the hammer after himself. The Hammer of Draginbeard, greatest dwarf champion of all times!
And later when he needs to impress him again, he can make his great reveal: I AM THE GREAT DRAGINBEARD!!!
Draginbeard 7th Jan 2013, 4:01 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
LOL! Whats funnier is that there is something else going on with this hammer. And its not at all what he thinks.
Songgu Kwon 8th Jan 2013, 10:41 AM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
This page is funny. You must keep it.
creamygnome 8th Jan 2013, 1:55 PM edit delete reply
creamygnome
I agree with everyone else. Leave it in!
Draginbeard 8th Jan 2013, 2:25 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
I was worried it was dragging the story out too long. I will keep it as is then. =)
shinka 10th Jan 2013, 7:24 PM edit delete reply
shinka
keep it ... It's adding up to the next one... building it :)
NastradumasGotYou 10th Jan 2013, 9:25 PM edit delete reply
NastradumasGotYou
this is good!
Blurlok 27th Feb 2013, 2:48 PM edit delete reply
Blurlok
I say keep it. Humourous, pretty, good use of text bubbles and encroaching darkness.
Draginbeard 27th Feb 2013, 3:58 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Thanks, I was looking to use the intensifying darkness to give off a feeling of being overwhelmed.

He knows he has to fight, but right at this moment, he doesn't even know if can hit this thing, let alone hurt it.
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